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Thursday, March 20, 2008

Memph Bleek is...


Nothing of Age?
written by KT


That little nigga's peeps/it's time to put him on

By the time I reached track 10 on Jay-Z’s venerable debut album “Reasonable Doubt,” it’s safe to say that I felt that dude was nice. I mean, I had a lot of context to back up this argument. Truth be told, I hadn’t heard Reasonable Doubt until after Volume 2 came out. I wasn’t checking for meaning and a lot of thought in my hip-hop diet back then. But the evidence was clear; I had heard him on “Money, Cash, Hoes” and “Reservoir Dogs.” He’s good.

But when I got to track 10 and saw Memphis Bleek’s name printed proudly next to Jay’s on “Coming of Age,” I was a little apprehensive; all that I’d heard from him was “Memphis Bleek Is…” which didn’t impress me much. I wasn’t expecting much from him on this joint. So, as Mr. Carter proclaimed “this little nigga’s peeps/it’s time to put him on,” in the last line of the chorus, I readied myself for what I was sure would be what I like to call, the “snooze verse.” You know, that verse on a track that you just push your mind through in order to get to the best one. Well, I was a little surprised.

‘Yo, he was nice on this one, man. Nah, I didn’t really say that,’ I can recall. That’s what I get for jumping to conclusions, huh? The hunger in his voice went perfectly with the wisdom and confidence present in Jay-Z’s. Like a mentor watching a student progress and grow into his own, Jay looked on as Memph bellowed eagerly:

“I'm out here slingin bringin'' the drama, tryin' to come up
in the game and add a couple of dollar signs to my name”

He sounded real, like he had seen Jay himself and felt the draw of the lifestyle he had built for himself. The parallel in reality was clear. The flow was perfect and his wordplay witty, much like his older counterpart. And even as Jay observes from a distance, Bleek does his own research and watches Jay while he longs for the life he has. As he moves effortlessly, gracefully from each line to the next, the infatuation becomes evident:

“I'm out here servin’ disturbin’ the peace, life could be better
like my man reclined in plush leather seats
He's sellin’ weight, I'm sellin’ eight... balls
sixteen tryin’ to graduate to pushin’ quarters y'all”

His ability to conjure up a feeling of wanton desire and weave a story with his words, he sort of reminded me of Jay on “22 Twos.” So, as he and Jay collab on the final verse and spit a two-sided diatribe, the ceiling inched higher and higher for Bleek as he stood toe to toe with his mentor. If you had listened to this album from day 1, from the day it dropped, you would have been reeled in easily by his eager flow and hungry delivery. It was as if I was listening to a younger version of the man I had begun to idolize, even as a 27 year old Shawn Carter’s voice floated through my ears.

I grew to like “Memphis Bleek is” a little more after hearing “Coming of Age” and when ”The Understanding” hit in 2000, I was sorely disappointed. Though Memphis Bleek had achieved platinum status with this record, there was much to be desired. Released around the time that rap had really come into it’s own as a commercial marketing tool, “Understanding” did nothing for the senses as Bleek didn’t seem to mature at all from the 16 year old kid he was. Did I expect the subject matter to waver so much? No, not really, but his delivery did nothing to belie his immaturity. While Jay would shine, and I mean like the sun, on Bleek’s biggest hit, “Is That Your Chick,” the Memph Man didn’t really step up from the background, at all.

Memphis Bleek’s spiral into relative obscurity had always been a fascinating one to me. Having clung so tightly while under Jay-Z’s wing, in the eyes of many (my own included), he never really left the ground. Doomed to face a public perception of mediocrity, Memphis Bleek has “The Process” slated for a 2008 release and as PTM shifts to an emphasis on how hip-hop has slipped into its own collective mediocrity, I think it’s prudent to think about whether Memphis Bleek can mature his ideas and grow a little more than he has shown so far. In the back of my mind, I want him to succeed and even Jay acknowledges that “Bleek could be one hit away his whole career.” But he needs to prove not only to us and Jay, but to himself, that he’s not satisfied with just having a place in Big Homie’s will.

Jay-Z feat. Memphis Bleek - Coming Of Age







16 comments:

Anonymous said...

Whats funny about the two "coming of ages", Jay-Z wrote them. So everything you said is right on, it was Jay's words just Bleek delivering them...

Mr. Hutson said...

Thank goodness Bleek is in the will somewhere...

And then when Beanie Sigel showed up, that just made things worse for him. He definitely outshined Amil, though. I think he'll remain one "hit away his whole career." The way DefJam/Roc-a-fella promoted CDs that aren't Jay or Kanye, things are looking (you guessed it) bleek.

Anonymous said...

Funny thing is I heard from a source that "Is that your chick" was originally a Jay track anyway. Remember back in the day when rappers used to have two versions of their albums? The one you got in the stores and the one you got off the streets, and some of the tracks would be different. Unreleased stuff that didn't make the album and the studio chucked (Nas was smart enough to release his as The Lost Tapes so HE could make money off of it). I heard the Jay version first and LOVED it. So it took a while for the Memph Bleek version to grow on me. It's unfortunate for him that he didn't live up to the hype cuz with Jay backing him he coulda really soared. I guess we have to wait and see what he has to offer us...I'm seeing a whole lot of features tho.

K Storm said...

Its really funny that you wrote about this. I had Jay on shuffle yesterday on my Zune, and he always repped for Bleek. Like he knew something about him that we weren't seeing. I get the feeling Jay has witnessed Bleek at his finest, its just when he has to produce, he falls short. Maybe some people are meant to be hype men their entire careers. Hes set for life n e way. Why is he still trying? Is success on that level really something he desires that much? Hes lacking something that the people are just not backing 100%. Jay has it, and I think if he could lend it to Bleek for an album he would. Who knows, maybe Jay will ghost write for him for the next one. Its possible.

Anonymous said...

If Jay was to Ghostwrite for him on the next one wouldn't that just make it even worse?! Rap is not like R&B and many other genres of music where it doesn't matter who writes the song cuz the talent is in the singing, etc. The talent is in the writing! Of course you gotta have the sound and the swagger but if you need someone else to do the writing you're lame. Shit I sound good reciting songs. I can even do the entire E.1999 Eternal front to back. But I would never put a joint out there claiming I wrote it and I didn't. Oh I really hope he doesn't go that route. I'd RATHER see a whole lot of features than for him to go out like that.

Anonymous said...

Ghost writers are all over the game and speaking of ghost writers did yall know snoop had a ghost writer for sensual seduction?

Anonymous said...

Snoop didn't write a single lyric for that album. He contracted the whole thing out to ghost writers...

Anonymous said...

Great f**king post KT!

Yo, Bleek is the embodiment of the benefits of a great friendship. Why does Bleek keep going? Well, his boss doesn't really care that his albums cost him money, so why not?

Yeah "Is That Your Chick" was supposed to be on Jay-Z's Vol. 3 but it got severely leaked and he changed up the album. I got another one of those "lost songs" on an upcoming Nyquil Mixtape.

Sidenote: The same thing happened to Mobb Deep's Murda Muzik album, the one that got leaked got 4.5 Mics (back when it meant something) but the actual version wasn't as good.

Beans and Kanye ruined Bleek's standing. Cuz he's supposed to be Jay's #2 but he's like 5th on the list (yes, Freeway has more buzz than he does)

Now having said that, Bleek isn't horrible. There's really one or two song on each of his albums where you say, "s**t if he did this more often, this album would be so dope."

Here's the best you might not have heard:

1. "My Hood to Your Hood" ft. Beans - Coming of Age
2. "Murderers 4 Life" ft. Ja Rule - Coming of Age (also on Ja's album)
3. "Hypnotic" - M.A.D.E.
4. "Got My Mind Right" - Backstage (helped start the whole Nas/Jay beef)
5. "Straight Path" - 5,3,4 (maybe his best song as a solo artist)

there's a few more but i'll stop here.

We'll i will give him credit, he definitely doesn't bitch and moan about what he isn't getting. He proudly plays his role.

Anonymous said...

"Got My Ming Right" was def a hot track! I've had debates about that one, I'm glad someone will now agree with me out loud.

Anonymous said...

Yeah and I know the ghostwriter thing is common. But I think it's a problem.

Anonymous said...

Man, the kid has some skill...it's just very raw (he's 28 I don't believe I am saying that)..."Round Here" is still one of my favorite joints...

Anonymous said...

wait, how do we know someone wrote all of snoop's album? i really like that album and i thought snoop did the damn thing. not sure how to feel if he ain't write one word.

Anonymous said...

http://smokingsection.rawkus.com/TSS/?p=3566

"In doing upcoming press for the release of his ninth album Ego Trippin’, Snoop turned heads by claiming he had used ghostwriters for the entire album."

http://www.hiphopdx.com/index/news/id.6484/title.snoop-reveals-he-has-ghostwriters

"In the current issue of XXL magazine, Snoop, “the only muthafucka that can do porno, coach football and have a cooking show”, openly admitted to having others write songs for him on his forthcoming album, Ego Trippin"

Those are just a couple links. Check out last month's XXL to see the interview, Jus.

Anonymous said...

DAMN... every bone in this Queens, NYC-HIP-HOP HEAD'S body is tellin' to diss the Dogg and disown him from rap and hate his album... but i can't. I'm not that mad.

1) He admitted it.
2) Diana Ross point makes mad sense

I'll still rate the music the same but he'll be placed in his proper place when it comes to lyricists. (he wasn't that high up to begin with)

K Storm said...

There's no Santa Clause? Wow Snoop is wrong for that one. This is why I love PTM

Mr. Hutson said...

By the way, my favorite Bleek joint was from Celebration off the Streets is Watching Sdtk. I just knew he was gonna get it in after that. Eh, maybe I was wrong, but that was still a sick verse.